What\'s your philosophy on life?

2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I haven\'t thought what my philosophy is on life. The way how I live is that don\'t make people uncomfortable for my convenience. We are not living alone, people must have a relationship with somebody in their society if it is small or large. So, it is important not to disturb somebody by doing something that I would like to do. It is the way to live in the democratic country. We can enjoy our freedom if we have to be responsible for all the results that caused from what we did. Actually, I am not sure what is morally right because all ethics and laws were made by humans. We have seen a lot of judgments that court judge made a decision depending on the prisoner\'s wealth. So, I think that the best way to manage my life is not to bother others.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! How are you?

We all have our philosophy in life. I understand your point.

You prefer to be silent in these cases. For me, living life to the fullest

is what I like to live my life. Life is short. I don\'t care about the future. I care more about my present,

because my present is what my future holds. ^^

~~May~~

I haven\'t thought what my philosophy is on life.

>> I haven\'t thought about what philosophy I have in life.

The way how I live is that don\'t make people uncomfortable for my convenience. 

>> I live my life by not making people feel uncomfortable for my convenience. 
We are not living alone, people must have a relationship with somebody in their society if it is small or large.

>> We are not living alone. People must have a social relationship in the society no matter how small or large it is.

So, it is important not to disturb somebody by doing something that I would like to do.

>> Correct

It is the way to live in the democratic country.

>> It is the way to live in a democratic country.

We can enjoy our freedom if we have to be responsible for all the results that caused from what we did.

>> We can enjoy our freedom if we have to uphold all the results that caused from what we did.

Actually, I am not sure what is morally right because all ethics and laws were made by humans.

>> Correct

We have seen a lot of judgments that court judge made a decision depending on the prisoner\'s wealth. 

>>We have seen a lot of judgments that has decided by a court judges, depending on the prisoner\'s wealth. 
So, I think that the best way to manage my life is not to bother others.

>> Correct

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