What\'s your philosophy on life?
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Good morning [이름]! How are you?
We all have our philosophy in life. I understand your point.
You prefer to be silent in these cases. For me, living life to the fullest
is what I like to live my life. Life is short. I don\'t care about the future. I care more about my present,
because my present is what my future holds. ^^
~~May~~
I haven\'t thought what my philosophy is on life.
>> I haven\'t thought about what philosophy I have in life.
The way how I live is that don\'t make people uncomfortable for my convenience.
>> I live my life by not making people feel uncomfortable for my convenience.
We are not living alone, people must have a relationship with somebody in their society if it is small or large.
>> We are not living alone. People must have a social relationship in the society no matter how small or large it is.
So, it is important not to disturb somebody by doing something that I would like to do.
>> Correct
It is the way to live in the democratic country.
>> It is the way to live in a democratic country.
We can enjoy our freedom if we have to be responsible for all the results that caused from what we did.
>> We can enjoy our freedom if we have to uphold all the results that caused from what we did.
Actually, I am not sure what is morally right because all ethics and laws were made by humans.
>> Correct
We have seen a lot of judgments that court judge made a decision depending on the prisoner\'s wealth.
>>We have seen a lot of judgments that has decided by a court judges, depending on the prisoner\'s wealth.
So, I think that the best way to manage my life is not to bother others.
>> Correct
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