What’s Your Shopping Style?

2010-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I think I am a smart shopper and an impulse buyer. Before going shopping , I try to make a shopping list. Whenever I need something , I make a memo on my cell phone. But sometimes when I look at something nice , I can't regist to buy it. Fortunately, I don't buy something expensive. So I usually shop during the sale. When I buy something , I compare prices on the internet by using my cell phone. There is a price comparison site on the internet. So I can know what the lowest price of that is. When I find the item has a resonable price , I buy it. That is how I shop.

강사 첨삭

Wow [이름], I think you are really a very smart shopper! You tend to list everything you buy and I think thats a smart idea for a someone to do most especially that you are a guy...I commend you for that!;;) See you later in our class my dear... T.Cam I think I am a smart shopper and an impulse buyer. >>I think Im a smart shopper and an impulsive buyer.Before going shopping , I try to make a shopping list. >>correct! >>Before shopping, I try to make a shoping list.Whenever I need something , I make a memo on my cell phone. >>correct!But sometimes when I look at something nice , I can't regist to buy it. >>But sometimes, whenever I look at something nice, I cant resist to buy it. >>But somethimes, whenever I look at something nice, I cant help but buy it.Fortunately, I don't buy something expensive. >>correct!So I usually shop during the sale. >>correct!When I buy something , I compare prices on the internet by using my cell phone. >>correct! >>When I buy something , I compare prices on the internet using my cell phone.There is a price comparison site on the internet. >>correct!So I can know what the lowest price of that is. >>correct!When I find the item has a resonable price , I buy it. >>correct!That is how I shop. >>correct!

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