What\'s your thought on Korean man seving in the military?
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I think Korean man serving in the military is unfair.
So I think Korean man and woman must equally serve in the military because they are all the same Korean.
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What\'s your thought on Korean men serving in the military?
I think Korean man serving in the military is unfair.
>> I think it\'s unfair for Korean men to serve in the military.
So I think Korean man and woman must equally serve in the military because they are all the same Korean.
>> So I think Korean men and women must equally serve in the military because they are all Koreans.
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