What\'s your thought on plastic surgery in the Korean showbusiness?
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I think that plastic surgery won\'t used. Some people may say \'why?\'. But it can be harmful for our health and face. So I think that plastic surgery won\'t used in the world.
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I think that plastic surgery won\'t used.
>> I believe that undergoing plastic surgery is not a good thing.
Some people may say \'why?\'.
>> Some people may ask, \'why?\'
But it can be harmful for our health and face.
>> But I can say that it brings us more harm than benefits. It harms our body and health in general.
So I think that plastic surgery won\'t used in the world.
>> So I think that plastic surgery shouldn\'t be prevalent in the world.
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