What\'s your thought on your school election? Do you think class presidents should be allowed to run
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I think my school election is equally because every students have a suffrage.
And I think class presidents should be allowed to run for the second or third time is bad,
because one people run for class leaders election several times is unfair.
I think many students experience as leaders is good.
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What\'s your thought on your school election? Do you think class presidents should be allowed to run for the second or third time? Explain your answer.
I think my school election is equally because every students have a suffrage.
>> I think my school election is fair because every student has suffrage.
And I think class presidents should be allowed to run for the second or third time is bad,
because one people run for class leaders election several times is unfair.
>> And I think it\'s not good to allow class presidents to run for the second or third time because it\'s unfair for one person to be a class leader several times.
I think many students experience as leaders is good.
>> I think it\'s good for many students to experience being leaders.
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