What\'s your thoughts on boys cooking?
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I think the boys cooking true because only have a father kids is the father cooking is very good for kids.
And boys are use cooking.
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What\'s your thoughts on boys cooking?
I think the boys cooking true because only have a father kids is the father cooking is very good for kids. And boys are use cooking.
>> I think boys don\'t cook because the father cooks for his kids and the kids can cook together with their dad and this will create a good memory and experience for the family.
>> [ NOTE: I\'M NOT SURE WHETHER I INTERPRETED YOUR SENTENCE CORRECTLY. ]
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