What safety measures can we do to keep ourselves safe from robbers?
학생이 쓴 원문
We should not go out alone at night. When we go out at night, we should go out at least 2 people. Women is phisically vulnerable, women go out with man for safe.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. We should not go out alone at night.
>>CORRECT!
2. When we go out at night, we should go out at least 2 people.
>>When we go out at night, there should at least be 2 people going out.
3. Women is physically vulnerable, women go out with man for safe.
>>Women are physically vulnerable, so they should go out with a man for safety.
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