What scares you most about the future?
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Future is unpredictable.
>> The future is unpredictable.
It is why future is scare.
>> It is why the future is scary.
We feel scary when we are in the room that doesn\'t have any lights. it is same thing.
>> We feel scared when we are in a room that doesn\'t have any lights. it is the same thing.
People feel scary when you can\'t see anything.
>> People feel scared when they can\'t see anything.
So many people work harder, in order to raise predictability of their life.
>> So many people work harder in order to raise the predictability of their life.
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