What school policy have you violated in high school?
학생이 쓴 원문
I didn\'t violate the school policy in high school. I wasn\'t late and attended all the classes at high school. My high school was more rigid in the hairstyle and clothes than nearby other high schools. But I didn\'t get caught once during high school life. I didn\'t absent and didn\'t cause a problem. I think that I smoothly spent my high school life.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jay!
I guess your parents must be so proud of you that never in their lives they were called by the school principal for any violation committed by their child.
Keep doing a great job. I admire your sentence construction. By the way, avoid redundancy or using the same word in a single sentence just like what I have checked on your composition. Great day ahead!
T. Aki~
I didn\'t violate the school policy in high school.
>>> CORRECT!
I wasn\'t late and attended all the classes at high school.
>>> I wasn\'t late and attended all the classes in high school.
My high school was more rigid in the hairstyle and clothes than nearby other high schools.
>>> CORRECT!
But I didn\'t get caught once during high school life.
>>> CORRECT!
I didn\'t absent and didn\'t cause a problem.
>>> I didn\'t absent and cause a problem
I think that I smoothly spent my high school life.
>>> CORRECT!
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