What should be avoided when traveling?
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I think It\'s too many things. One of them is to avoid many pickpocket. It\'s because if I was stolen my passport by a pickpocket, I couldn\'t come back home. So, I must always look all around for safe traveling. And the other thing is to avoid a bad weather. Because I think the bad weather can be changed a natural disaster whenever.
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Good day Cindy!
Thank you for dong your homework! I definitely agree on your point. we have to be careful especially with strangers, we don\'t know if they are really offering help or taking advantage of us. Take care!
Aki~
I think It\'s too many things.
>>> Correct!
Or >> I think there are a lot of things.
One of them is to avoid many pickpocket.
>>> One of them is to avoid many pickpockets.
It\'s because if I was stolen my passport by a pickpocket, I couldn\'t come back home.
>>> Because if my passport has been stolen by a pickpocket, I couldn\'t go home.
So, I must always look all around for safe traveling.
>>> Correct!
And the other thing is to avoid a bad weather.
>>> And the other thing is to avoid bad weather.
Because I think the bad weather can be changed a natural disaster whenever.
>>> Because bad weather can change into a more serious natural disaster.
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