What should countries do to prevent conflict when other nations in the world are not trying to bring
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Happy Monday Sir [이름]!
Welcome to the last week of August! Hihihi!
You are really incredible in sharing your ideas.
You are open for corrections and you put into practice all of it.
Keep it up. Let us hope that there will be peace.
Talk to you very soon. Take care!
I can\'t wait to hear your thoughts in class.
Teacher Nina
Who doesn’t want peace?
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Who like bloodshed?
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The notorious groups or countries for their brutality and extremism toward western countries such as Iran, Pakistan, North Korea, Palestine, Cuba, etc want peace as well.
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>> OR:The notorious groups or countries for their brutality and extremism toward western countries such as Iran, Pakistan, North Korea, Palestine, Cuba, and a lot more want peace as well.
Even Islamic terrorists want peace.
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They have their own reasons to fight regardless of whether their reasoning is right or wrong.
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Depending on which side you are on, the country could be viewed as an axis of evil or your friend.
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In this world, there is no absolute good and evil.
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Good and evil are not fixed, stable entities, but are continually trading places.
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A good may be transformed into an evil in the next second, and vice versa.
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The most important thing is to maintain the balance between the constantly moving good and evil.
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>> OR: The most important thing is to maintain the balance between the constantly moving right and bad actions.
If you lean too much in either direction, it becomes difficult to maintain actual morals.
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Indeed, balance itself is the good.
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>> OR: Indeed, balance itself is good.
Israel is regarded as a terrorist from Palestinians and other Islamic countries, however they are supported by America.
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>> OR: Israel is regarded as a terrorist from Palestinians and other Islamic countries, though they are supported by the U.S.
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