what should i do?
학생이 쓴 원문
I hate slugs and snails, especially slugs.
They gnaw my pretty flower buds and leaves up in the dark and make them wither to die. So do rolly-pollys
I put pieces of watermelon‘s rind on some possible spots in my garden at twilight and went out around ten p.m. to catch them with a bowl of acetate acid. I picked the pieces one by one and remove the bugs from the rinds and threw them into the strong vinegar. To avoid this disgusting job, how about to feed a chicken to eat them up all? It sounds a nice idea! But if I raise a chicken in my garden, surely will another problem occur. That is roaming cats in my neighborhood. will kill it! My husband suggested that we should raise a chicken and a dog together. But they might destroy my flowers by different ways.
강사 첨삭
Oh Hi Ms. [Name]!
I am really sorry to hear about this problem. As you told me yesterday, what you were doing is time consuming and tiring of course. I tried to do some research on how to fight these slugs and snails. I hope it will help. just check on the link that I provided below. Oh, I hope you will be able to eliminate these slugs permanently in order for you to enjoy more your beautiful garden. You can do it Ms. [Name]. Take care.
Lei :-)
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They gnaw my pretty flower buds and leaves up in the dark and make them wither to die.
They gnaw my pretty flower buds and leaves up in the dark and make them wither to die.
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So do rolly-pollys
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I put pieces of watermelons rind on some possible spots in my garden at twilight and go out around ten p.m. to catch them with a bowl of acetate acid.
I put pieces of watermelons rind on some possible spots in my garden at twilight and go out around ten p.m. to catch them with a bowl of acetate acid.
>>correct
I picked the pieces one by one and remove the bugs from the rinds and threw them into the strong vinegar.
>>correct
To avoid this disgusting job, how about to feed a chicken to eat them up all?
>>correct
It sounds a nice idea!
>>correct
But if I raise a chicken in my garden, surely will another problem occur.
>>But if I raise a chicken in my garden, but surely it will cause another problem
That is roaming cats in my neighborhood will kill it!
>>correct
My husband suggested that we should raise a chicken and a dog together.
>>correct
But they might destroy my flowers by different ways.
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P.S.
here's a link I found on how to fight slugs and snails:
http://www.thegardenhelper.com/slugs.html
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