what should i do?

2010-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I hate slugs and snails, especially slugs. They gnaw my pretty flower buds and leaves up in the dark and make them wither to die. So do rolly-pollys I put pieces of watermelon‘s rind on some possible spots in my garden at twilight and went out around ten p.m. to catch them with a bowl of acetate acid. I picked the pieces one by one and remove the bugs from the rinds and threw them into the strong vinegar. To avoid this disgusting job, how about to feed a chicken to eat them up all? It sounds a nice idea! But if I raise a chicken in my garden, surely will another problem occur. That is roaming cats in my neighborhood. will kill it! My husband suggested that we should raise a chicken and a dog together. But they might destroy my flowers by different ways.

강사 첨삭

Oh Hi Ms. [Name]!
I am really sorry to hear about this problem. As you told me yesterday, what you were doing is time consuming and tiring of course. I tried to do some research on how to fight these slugs and snails. I hope it will help. just check on the link that I provided below. Oh, I hope you will be able to eliminate these slugs permanently in order for you to enjoy more your beautiful garden. You can do it Ms. [Name]. Take care.
Lei :-)

I hate slugs and snails, especially slugs.
>>correct
They gnaw my pretty flower buds and leaves up in the dark and make them wither to die. 
>>correct
So do rolly-pollys
>>correct
I put pieces of watermelons rind on some possible spots in my garden at twilight and go out around ten p.m. to catch them with a bowl of acetate acid. 
>>correct
I picked the pieces one by one and remove the bugs from the rinds and threw them into the strong vinegar. 
>>correct
To avoid this disgusting job, how about to feed a chicken to eat them up all? 
>>correct
It sounds a nice idea! 
>>correct
But if I raise a chicken in my garden, surely will another problem occur. 
>>But if I raise a chicken in my garden, but surely it will cause another problem
That is roaming cats in my neighborhood will kill it! 
>>correct
My husband suggested that we should raise a chicken and a dog together. 
>>correct
But they might destroy my flowers by different ways.
>>correct

P.S.
here's a link I found on how to fight slugs and snails:

http://www.thegardenhelper.com/slugs.html

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