What should I do if I’m homeless

2021-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think I will find something that I can do. It will be really hopeless but I should live my life so I should try whatever I can. I never think about that I become to homeless. It is hard question but I believe that there’s life, there’s hope.

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I think I will find something that I can do. 
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It will be really hopeless but I should live my life so I should try whatever I can. 
>>CORRECT

I never think about that I become to homeless. 
>> I have never thought about being homeless before. 

It is hard question but I believe that there’s life, there’s hope
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