What should people with insomnia do?
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I saw a lot of people who take some medicine to get rid of insomnia. I think that is easy and universal way. But sometimes, others try some some remedy or drink many kinds of tea.
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-T. Julia
I saw a lot of people who take some medicine to get rid of insomnia.
>> Correct
I think that is easy and universal way.
>> I think that is an easy and universal way.
But sometimes, others try some some remedy or drink many kinds of tea.
>> However, at times, others try various remedies or drink different kinds of tea.
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