What should the Education Ministry do to improve its own inspection system to ensure greater fairnes
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The Education Ministry needs to inspect and monitor how to process to choose all applicants at universities. It is sometimes unfair that they pick up the students and so most right of autonomy of universities are lost. It\'s time to change the rules.
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Thank you for doing your homework. Well done and keep up the good work. See you in class! Have a nice day~ T. Jasper
Thank you for doing your homework. Well done and keep up the good work. See you in class! Have a nice day~ T. Jasper
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>> The education ministry needs to inspect and monitor how universities choose their applicants.
It is sometimes unfair that they pick up the students and so most right of autonomy of universities are lost.
>> The way some universities pick their applicants are unfair and so their autonomy rights were lost.
It\'s time to change the rules.
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