What should the government prioritize in this situation?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most important thing is that the government protect their citizen from risk factor or infection source.
If it is necessary, the government must carry out a entry ban from infected country.
In addition, the government should recommend the citizen not to go out and the government must supply their life such as food, basic living expenses.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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The most important thing is that the government protect their citizen from risk factor or infection source.>>>> OR: The most important thing is that the government should protect their citizen from risk factors or infection sources.
If it is necessary, the government must carry out a entry ban from infected country.
>>>> If it is necessary, the government must carry out an entry ban from infected countries.
In addition, the government should recommend the citizen not to go out and the government must supply their life such as food, basic living expenses.
>>>> OR: In addition, the government should recommend the citizen not to go out and the government must supply them with necessities such as food and basic living expenses.
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