What should we do to ensure our health?
학생이 쓴 원문
We have a proverb for health in Korea as below.
\" If you lose money, you lose a little bit, if you lose a lot of honor and if you lose health, you lose everything.\"
Keeping and maintaining of his or her Health is very important in their life.
Sometimes, I think I am very proud of myself who have been playing table tennis for 25years.
I really need muscular strengths of my legs, arms and waist for a long playing with my sports mate.
Once again, I strongly stress the importance of health to all of persons. specially children.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ethan!
Thank you for your answer.
I appreciate you for sharing the proverb.
I agree with it. Losing our honor and our health would be the same as losing everything.
Those are parts of our lives which can never be bought by money or anything.
Let\'s stay healthy and do our best to keep fit. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> We have a proverb for health in Korea as stated below.
\" If you lose money, you lose a little bit, if you lose a lot of honor and if you lose health, you lose everything.\"
\" If you lose money, you lose a little bit, if you lose a lot of honor and if you lose health, you lose everything.\"
>> CORRECT.
Keeping and maintaining of his or her Health is very important in their life.
Keeping and maintaining of his or her Health is very important in their life.
>> Keeping and maintaining of his and her health is very important in their life.
>> Or: Keeping and maintaining of his or her health is very important in his or her life.
Sometimes, I think I am very proud of myself who have been playing table tennis for 25years.
Sometimes, I think I am very proud of myself who have been playing table tennis for 25years.
>> Sometimes, I think I am very proud of myself who has been playing table tennis for 25 years.
I really need muscular strengths of my legs, arms and waist for a long playing with my sports mate.
I really need muscular strengths of my legs, arms and waist for a long playing with my sports mate.
>> I really need muscular strength for my legs, arms and waist for a long playing time with my sports mate.
Once again, I strongly stress the importance of health to all of persons. specially children.
Once again, I strongly stress the importance of health to all of persons. specially children.
>> CORRECT.
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