What should we do to increase the awareness about environmental pollution? Do you have any ideas on

2015-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Media like TV or newspapers should advertise more about the seriousness of environmental pollution. A national campaign to increase the awareness about the pollution should be aggressively driven via the collaboration between the government and civic groups. Education at school is also important to make young students aware of it. One of the ways to reduce the use of plastic bags and Styrofoam boxes is to impose more taxes on those who throw them away. The Korean government has already enforced a law that mandates shop owners not to give their customers a plastic bag free of charge. Moreover, companies are restricted to use styrofoam in excess of certain ratio of the total size of the package. If they do, they should pay a fine. In Korea, the recycling policy is well designed and working well. Korean households have to buy designated plastic bags to throw away garbage. For food waste, we also pay the food waste collection charge. At each apartment, there are separate reclcying bins.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Happy hump day!

Whew! We finished the first two days of the week. ^.^

How is your week going?

I hope you are having a wonderful time.
I totally agree with your ideas below.
We should start it with ourselves.

Talk to you later.
Teacher Nina


Media like TV or newspapers should advertise more about the seriousness of environmental pollution.

>> correct ^.^

A national campaign to increase the awareness about the pollution should be aggressively driven via the collaboration between the government and civic groups.

>> correct ^.^

>> OR: National campaigns to increase the awareness about pollution should be aggressively driven via the collaboration between the government and civic groups.

Education at school is also important to make young students aware of it.

>> correct ^.^

One of the ways to reduce the use of plastic bags and Styrofoam boxes is to impose more taxes on those who throw them away.

>> correct ^.^

The Korean government has already enforced a law that mandates shop owners not to give their customers a plastic bag free of charge.

>> correct ^.^

Moreover, companies are restricted to use styrofoam in excess of certain ratio of the total size of the package.

>> correct ^.^

If they do, they should pay a fine.

>> correct ^.^

In Korea, the recycling policy is well designed and working well.

>> correct ^.^

Korean households have to buy designated plastic bags to throw away garbage.

>> correct ^.^

For food waste, we also pay the food waste collection charge.

>> correct ^.^

At each apartment, there are separate reclcying bins.

>> correct ^.^

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