What should we do to prevent pandemics in the future
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To prevent pandemics in the future I think we have to keep our body clean and check foods before eating. I heard bat cause the Covid-19. We should always be careful and avoid dangerous things. Also I think government should give a help to people who are studying about virus.
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To prevent pandemics in the future I think we have to keep our body clean and check foods before eating.
>> To prevent pandemics in the future, I think we have to keep our bodies clean and check foods before eating.
I heard bat cause the Covid-19.
>> I heard that a person who ate a bat caused the COVID-19 virus.
We should always be careful and avoid dangerous things.
>>CORRECT
Also I think government should give a help to people who are studying about virus.
>>Also I think government should give a help to people who are studying about viruses.
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