What should you bring for a trip?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two things that I always take for traveling, which are rubber band and earphones. The reason why I always try to take rubber band is because I don\'t feel comfortable when I sleep with my hair untied. Next, I have a tendency to listen to the certain singer\'s particular album when I travel, so I need earphones. The reason that I do that is the album and the tracks can be the reminder of my last traveling. Therefore, I can feel the emotion and remember the memories of traveling by listening to those music.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your unique way of remembering and enjoying your travel, Liz. Thank you for your kindness in class, too. I hope we can still see each other again in the future. Take care!-Faith-
There are two things that I always take for traveling, which are rubber band and earphones. >> There are two things that I always take when traveling, which are rubber bands and earphones.
The reason why I always try to take rubber band is because I don\'t feel comfortable when I sleep with my hair untied.
>> The reason why I always try to take rubber bands with me is because I don\'t feel comfortable when I sleep with my hair untied.
Next, I have a tendency to listen to the certain singer\'s particular album when I travel, so I need earphones.
>> Next, I have a tendency to listen to a certain singer\'s particular album when I travel, so I need earphones.
The reason that I do that is the album and the tracks can be the reminder of my last traveling.
>> The reason that I do that is the album and the tracks can be the reminder of my travel experience.
Therefore, I can feel the emotion and remember the memories of traveling by listening to those music.
>> Therefore, I can feel the emotions and remember the memories of traveling by listening to that kind of music.
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