What should you do personally to protect yourself from this infectious disease?

2020-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I do wipe the cell phone,bags and shoes with alcohol wet wipes as soon as I come back home. I think people should not overlook it. That type of item is exposed to the public and I frequently touch So it has a possibility to have pollutions on it. And for a while, I have to check by my self whether i have fever or not and I don`t go to other place to prevent. Today I got the message from the goverment office. The text is If you are isolator, just stay at home. If they ignore it, they will get a penalty. I agree with that sensible decision for the public and I advocate it. because of lack of hospitals and some place for the patient in here, I hope developing the medicines to get rid of the virus. Anyway I wait to retrive the normal life cycles.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. 
- T. Beth
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I do wipe the cell phone,bags and shoes with alcohol wet wipes as soon as I come back home. 
>>>  correct  
I think people should not overlook it.
>>>  correct
That type of item is exposed to the public and I frequently touch So it has a possibility to have pollutions on it.
>>>  Those items are exposed to the public and I frequently touch them so it possible that they are conta[이름]ated with the virus.  
And for a while, I have to check by my self whether i have fever or not and I don`t go to other place to prevent.
>>> And for a while, I have to check myself whether I have a fever or not and I don`t go to other places for prevention.   
Today I got the message from the goverment office. 
>>Today I got the message from the government office.   
The text is If you are isolator, just stay at home. 
>>> The text is if you are isolated, just stay at home.    
If they ignore it, they will get a penalty. 
>>> correct   
I agree with that sensible decision for the public and I advocate it.
>>> correct   
because of lack of hospitals and some place for the patient in here, I hope developing the medicines to get rid of the virus.
>>>  Because of lack of hospitals and some places for the patient in here, I hope for the development of the medicines to get rid of the virus.  
Anyway I wait to retrive the normal life cycles.
>>> Anyway, I am waiting for things to go back to normal.   

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