What should you know about your country?

2024-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I have to know Korean History, Korean language and Korean Culture. First is Korean History, Because It\'s fundaion. And second is Korean landuage, Because It\'s a my country\'s language and also fundaion too. And lastly a Korean Culture, Because I have to know the culture It\'s fundaion. These are the we should know my country.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best.
~ T. Camille


I have to know Korean History, Korean language and Korean Culture.
>> CORRECT!
First is Korean History, Because It\'s fundaion.
>> First is the Korean History, because it\'s the foundation.
And second is the Korean landuage, Because It\'s a my country\'s language and also fundaion too.
>> And second is Korean landuage, because it\'s my country\'s language, and also a part of the foundation.
And lastly a Korean Culture, Because I have to know the culture It\'s fundaion.
>> And lastly is the Korean Culture, because it\'s the basic one, so I have to know the culture of my country.
These are the we should know my country.
>> These are the reasons why we should know my country.

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