What should you never miss putting your bag?
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What should you never miss putting your bag?
We should never miss putting our bag, that`s our passport or Id card, the toilet kit, the first aid medicine and some clothes when taking a trip.
When was the last time you had to pack so much?
It was about 15 years old. I had to pack so much when I move to a my new apartment. It was so hard to pack for few days at that time.
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What should you never miss putting your bag?
We should never miss putting our bag, that`s our passport or Id card, the toilet kit, the first aid medicine and some clothes when taking a trip.
We should never miss putting our bag, that`s our passport or Id card, the toilet kit, the first aid medicine and some clothes when taking a trip.
>>> We should never miss putting in our bag our passport or ID card, the toiletries, the first aid medicine and some clothes when taking a trip.
When was the last time you had to pack so much?
It was about 15 years old.
It was about 15 years old.
>>> It was about 15 years ago.
I had to pack so much when I move to a my new apartment.
>>> I had to pack so much when I moved to my new apartment.
It was so hard to pack for few days at that time.
>>> correct
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