What significance does Chuseok hold for you personally, and how do you celebrate it?
학생이 쓴 원문
To me, Chuseok is a time when family gathers together and spends a happy time. The custom of laughing together, having fun, and honoring ancestors is a unique Korean tradition.
Hi kelly,
I turned on my laptop at 6:10 and couldn\'t see you.
I chatted at 6:14 and you didn\'t respond.
I don\'t know what\'s going on.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about Chuseok. I hope you had a wonderful time during the Chuseok holiday. Anyway, I called you on time and sent a message, but a pop-up message on Skype indicated that you were offline. I hope to see you on Monday.^^
~Kelly^^
To me, Chuseok is a time when family gathers together and spends a happy
time.
> Correct
OR:
>> For me, Chuseok is a time for family to come together and enjoy moments of happiness.
The custom of laughing together, having fun, and honoring
ancestors is a unique Korean tradition.
>> Correct
OR:
>> The tradition of sharing laughter, enjoying time together, and paying respect to ancestors is a distinct part of Korean culture
Hi kelly,
I turned on my laptop at 6:10 and couldn\'t see you.
>> Correct
I chatted at 6:14 and you didn\'t respond.
>> Correct
I don\'t know what\'s going on.
>> Correct
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