What situation excites or motivates you?
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Thank you. Please take note below the following corrections I made.
T.STACY
YOU SAY:
When I plan a trip, I\'m always excited and happy.
CORRECT
OR:
Every time I plan my trip, I always feel excited and happy.
YOU SAY:
Because I can concentrate on myself without consciousness.
BETTER SAY:
Because I can focus on myself without being conscious.
YOU SAY:
also new place and people make me pleasant .
BETTER SAY:
Seeing new places and meeting new people makes me feel good.
YOU SAY:
last summer, I traveled dosmetic trip alone ( This was the first time,I\'ve done it)
BETTER SAY:
Last Summer, I went on a domestic trip. (It was the first time I have done it).
YOU SAY:
I could learn about small world and me while doing a trip.
BETTER SAY:
I learned about the world and myself while I was on that trip.
YOU SAY:
So traveling is the one of my life .
BETTER SAY:
So Travelling is my life.
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