What skill do you want to learn in the future and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely, English!!! I want to go aborad and work in there. but It needs fluent English speaking skill. also when I travel to somewhere outside of my country, English resolves the problem of communication. that\'s all!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Yes! English is the universal language. You would be able to do a lot of things if you are fluent with it. Don\'t worry, we will work on you speaking skills more and more. :)
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Absolutely, English!!!
>> It would absolutely be English! .
I want to go aborad and work in there.
>> I want to go abroad and work there but it requires you to be fluent in English.
but It needs fluent English speaking skill.
>>CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
also when I travel to somewhere outside of my country, English resolves the problem of communication.
>> Also, when I travel to other countries, English is the key when you have problems communicating with other people.
that\'s all!
>> That\'s all.
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