What skills are the most important in my work?

2025-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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The main tasks in my work is designing and developing wiper-related component for new project. I make the drawing for the component through cad program with basic mechanical knowledge that can design the components. I make some report such as investment draft, design report,and so on. Sometimes I discuss about some issues with customer for the project. My job need drawing skill, presentation skill, communcation skill, and so on. Most important skill is making the drawing for the component through cad program with basic mechanical knowledge that can design the components.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jayjay!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to remember:

1. The main tasks in my work is designing and developing wiper-related component for new project.

>>The main tasks in my work are designing and developing wiper-related component for new projects.

2. I make the drawing for the component through cad program, with basic mechanical knowledge that can design the components.

>>CORRECT!

3. I make some report such as investment draft, design report, and so on.

>>I make some reports such as investment draft, design report, and so on.

4. Sometimes I discuss about some issues with customer for the project.

>>Sometimes I discuss some project issues with the customer.

5. My job need drawing skill, presentation skill, communcation skill, and so on.

>>My job needs drawing skills, presentation skills, communication skills, and so on.

6. Most important skill is making the drawing for the component through cad program with basic mechanical knowledge that can design the components.

>>The most important skill is making the drawing for the component through cad program, with basic mechanical knowledge that can design the components.

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