What skills do you think are most critical to this job?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that volunteering should be unconditional first. In particular, volunteering in a other country will be twice harder than one\'s own country. I think it is a wrong habit to ignore the other person or to be recognized as a person when doing volunteer work.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for making this wonderful composition. You did great! If you have any questions please feel free to ask me tomorrow. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
In particular, volunteering in a other country will be twice harder than one\'s own country.
>>In particular, volunteering in another country will twice harder than in one\'s own country.
I think it is a wrong habit to ignore the other person or to be recognized as a person when doing volunteer work.
>>CORRECT!
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