What skills should be taught for students?

2012-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

The time I spent in high school is one of my precious experiences. During the time, I gained the strong confidence to challenge my life by aquiring various subjects and social skills. Every person has own one great skill or favorite at least. In this sense, providing diverse subjects for students is essential because they will be able to get confidence by scoring good grades in the subjucts which thy are good at or interested in. In light of my high school years, I could have confidence by getting great grades in my favorite subjects such as English, maths, and Chinise words. Altough it was difficult for me to achieve high scores in the other subjects, I could try to study hard about those subjects with the confidence I took from what I like. Finally, I could succeed on what I challenged by leaping 10% in the ranking of my high school. Thus, many types of subjects enable students' confidence to challenge what they are not good at.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework! Good job! I am inspired by your passion which is so obvious in this composition you made. Keep up the good work! I know you will succeed in your goal to study English and I am happy to be your teacher. I can\'t wait to see you in class later. Take care! -------T. Chloe------- The time I spent in high school is one of my precious experiences. >>>CORRECT! During the time, >>>During that time, I gained the strong confidence to challenge my life by aquiring various subjects and social skills. >>>CORRECT! Every person has own one great skill or favorite at least. >>>Every person has at least one great or favorite skill. In this sense, providing diverse subjects for students is essential because they will be able to get confidence by scoring good grades in the subjucts which thy are good at or interested in. >>>CORRECT! >>>**please take note of how you spell the word \"subjects\"  In light of my high school years, I could have confidence by getting great grades in my favorite subjects such as English, maths, and Chinise words. >>>CORRECT! >>>**please take note of how you spell the words \"Math\" and \"Chinese\"  Altough it was difficult for me to achieve high scores in the other subjects, >>>CORRECT! I could try to study hard about those subjects with the confidence I took from what I like. >>>CORRECT!  Finally, I could succeed on what I challenged by leaping 10% in the ranking of my high school. >>>Finally, I could succeed by ten percent in the overall ranking for my high school by challenging myself. Thus, many types of subjects enable students\' confidence to challenge what they are not good at. >>>CORRECT!

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