What smartphone app do you use the most? Why?
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I usually use the \'Ondrive\' app, which can save the file and it can be linked to my phone, in my smartphone. Because I mostly save my works as word file on my computer, it is useful to review my works on my smartphone. Furthermore, it provides a lot of storage capacity than other apps for saving file.
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Good evening Ms. [이름]!
Congratulations on doing your first homework!
And I must say it isn\'t bad at all.
Good work!
I usually use the \'Ondrive\' app, which can save the file and it can be linked to my phone, in my smartphone.
>>I usually use the \'Ondrive\' app, which can save files and it can be linked to my smartphone.
OR: I usually use the \'Ondrive\' app, which allows me to save files and connect to my smartphone.
Because I mostly save my works as word file on my computer, it is useful to review my works on my smartphone.
>>Because it is easier and more useful for me to save most of my work as a word file on my computer and review my work on my smartphone.
Furthermore, it provides a lot of storage capacity than other apps for saving file.
>>Furthermore, it offers more storage capacity than other apps for file storage.
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