What social activity with other people except your family do you like best?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I believe social activities make people feel refreshed and satisfied in many ways including me. Especially, in my case hanging out with my coworkers are meaningful. I can relieve stress from the work and compromise some situations like relationships with them and the like. For instance, from time to time I meet them in a pub and we hit the bottle with deep conversations and it is really helpful for us.
Apart from that, I like riding a bike with my friends along Han river bicycle roads and it is quite exciting.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름], happy Sunday!
As adults, we also want to take a short break away from the hustle and bustle of our daily lives. Spending time with our friends and colleagues can be a meaningful experience. While hanging out, sharing stories and professional sharing can better your working interaction. Just always draw the line between work and pleasure.
Thank you so much for your answer. I will see you next week for more of our discussions.
Keep up the motivation for writing.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Apart from that, I like riding a bike with my friends along Han river bicycle roads and it is quite exciting.
Especially, in my case hanging out with my coworkers are meaningful.
>> Especially in my case, hanging out with my coworkers is meaningful.
I can relieve stress from the work and compromise some situations like relationships with them and the like.
>> Correct!
For instance, from time to time I meet them in a pub and we hit the bottle with deep conversations and it is really helpful for us.
>> Correct!
Apart from that, I like riding a bike with my friends along Han river bicycle roads and it is quite exciting.
>> Correct!
Or: Apart from that, I like riding a bike with my friends along Han River bicycle roads and it is quite exciting.
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