What social issue does your country have?
학생이 쓴 원문
The social problem in my country is that the punishment for crime is too low.
No matter how serious the crime is, it is difficult to pass for two years.
I think it must be fixed.
I think safety is fine compared to any other country in the world, but crime is always scary.
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The social problem in my country is that the punishment for crime is too low.
>>The social problem in my country is that the punishment for a crime is too low.
No matter how serious the crime is, it is difficult to pass for two years.
>>CORRECT
OR>>No matter how serious the crime is, the sentence is not longer than two years.
I think it must be fixed.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think it must be amended.
I think safety is fine compared to any other country in the world, but crime is always scary.
>>CORRECT
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