What social networking sites do you use?
학생이 쓴 원문
In the past, I used many SNS such as facebook, twitter, instagram etc. It was fun and easy to communicate each other. However, soon after I was tired of them. I think it spent time too much. Now I don\'t have anything. I did cut all.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
Happy Monday!
I remember I had a great fun talking with you last week.
I hope to talk with you again.
Anyway, here are the corrections.
In the past, I used many SNS such as facebook, twitter, instagram etc.
>>> Correct!
It was fun and easy to communicate each other.
>>> It was fun and easy to communicate to each other.
However, soon after I was tired of them.
>>> Correct!
I think it spent time too much. Now I don\'t have anything. I did cut all.
>>> Correct!
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