What song would you like to dedicate to your parents and why?

2022-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I would like to dedicate an old song to my parents. Because my parents love old songs, and also they are familiar with them. Actually, I don\'t want to sing a song in front of my parents. But if I have to, then I will dedicate an old song my parents would like.

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Hi [이름]! 

That\'s very sweet of you :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

I would like to dedicate an old song to my parents.
>> CORRECT

Because my parents love old songs, and also they are familiar with them.
>> Because my parents love old songs, and that\'s what they are familiar with. 

Actually, I don\'t want to sing a song in front of my parents.
>> CORRECT

But if I have to, then I will dedicate an old song my parents would like.
>>But if I have to, then I will dedicate an old song that my parents would like. 

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