What song would you like to sing for your parents and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I used to sing a children’s song well in front of my parent when I was a child.
However, I barely sing for my parents these days. There are some reasons about that.
First and foremost, I don’t like to sing in front of people. I think I have a lot of shy.
Besides, I think I’m not good at singing songs as much as I can show it in front of people.
Although I don’t like it, there is an exception. It is only my parent’s birthdays.
When the date is coming up, I sing a birthday’s song together for them with a delicious cake that I prepare.
I really hope that one day I will sing very well like famous singers.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That\'s so heartwarming! You are a very sweet daughter. Your parents are very lucky to have you. ^^
I used to sing a children’s song well in front of my parent when I was a child.
>> I used to sing a children’s song well in front of my parents when I was a child.
However, I barely sing for my parents these days.
>> CORRECT
There are some reasons about that.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I think I have a lot of shy.
>> I think I am very shy.
Besides, I think I’m not good at singing songs as much as I can show it in front of people.
>> CORRECT
>>OR: Besides, I think I’m not good at singing songs to the point that I can show it in front of people.
Although I don’t like it, there is an exception.
>> Even though I don\'t like singing, there is an exception and that is on either of my parent\'s birthday.
It is only my parent’s birthdays.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
When the date is coming up, I sing a birthday’s song together for them with a delicious cake that I prepare.
>> When the date is coming up, I sing a birthday song to them with a delicious cake that I prepared.
I really hope that one day I will sing very well like famous singers.
>> CORRECT
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