What songs or music would you like to fall asleep to?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to fall asleep with an classic music because the classic music makes me sleepy.
Also I want to fall asleep with an idol song because I like idol song so I think I can fall asleep more good.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
You did an outstanding job today.
The corrections were really minor.
You used correct terms and expressions.
You did a really good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to fall asleep with an classic music because the classic music makes me sleepy.
>> I want to fall asleep with classical music on because it makes me sleepy.
Also I want to fall asleep with an idol song because I like idol song so I think I can fall asleep more good.
Also I want to fall asleep with an idol song because I like idol song so I think I can fall asleep more good.
>> I also like to fall asleep to idol songs because they make me sleep better.
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