What special features do you think should be added to computers?
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Truly, I don\'t what special features should be added to computer. It\'s because I\'m a computer illiterate. But if I can do it, I could add the artificial intelligence like Jarvis. It\'s from Iron man. :)
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Hi [이름]:)
Yes, that\'s a great idea. I hope that computers would be like Jarvis someday. That would be so cool! hahahah!
Truly, I don\'t what special features should be added to computer.
>> Truly, I don\'t want to add any special features to computers.
It\'s because I\'m a computer illiterate.
>> It is because I am computer literate.
But if I can do it, I could add the artificial intelligence like Jarvis. It\'s from Iron man. :)
>> But if I had the chance, I would like to add artificial intelligence like Jarvis from the movie Iron Man.
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