What sport do you think is the most expensive? why?
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I don\'t know well abour sports. In my opinion, golf is the most expensive sport. Because there are many things to prepare to play golf.
For example, rocket, ball, suncap, clothes, shoes, ect...
Moreover field is essential. So, I think golf is the most expensive sport.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I don\'t know well abour sports.
>>I don\'t know well about sports. (Spelling - about)
In my opinion, golf is the most expensive sport.
>>CORRECT
Because there are many things to prepare to play golf.
>>CORRECT
For example, rocket, ball, suncap, clothes, shoes, ect...
>> For example, rocket, ball, sun cap, clothes, shoes, etc... (Spelling - sun cap, etc...)
Moreover field is essential.
>>CORRECT
So, I think golf is the most expensive sport.
>>CORRECT
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