What sport do you think is the most fun to do?
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Topic: What sport do you think is the most fun to do?
There are a lot of sports that I tried before. But my best sport is basketball of those. It\'s because, shooting is so fun, basketball game is also fun, and it has a lot of teamwork.
First, shooting is fun. When I shoot in a net, I feel so happy, and makes me scream.
Second, basketball game is so fun. When I win a game I feel very good.
Lastly, it has a lot of teamwork. If I win, I thank my friends.
In conclusion, I like basket ball becouse of these three reasons. Also, I also want to try ping pong that makes me taller.
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Topic: What sport do you think is the most fun to do?
There are a lot of sports that I tried before.
There are a lot of sports that I tried before.
>>> CORRECT
But my best sport is basketball of those.
>>> But the best sports is basketball.
It\'s because, shooting is so fun, basketball game is also fun, and it has a lot of teamwork.
>>> It\'s because, shooting in basketball is fun, and it has a lot of teamwork.
First, shooting is fun.
>>> CORRECT
When I shoot in a net, I feel so happy, and makes me scream.
>>> When I shoot the ball, I feel so happy, and it makes me scream.
Second, basketball game is so fun.
Second, basketball game is so fun.
>>> CORRECT
When I win the game I feel very good.
>>> CORRECT
Lastly, it has a lot of teamwork.
Lastly, it has a lot of teamwork.
>>> CORRECT
If I win, I thank my friends.
>>> CORRECT
In conclusion, I like basket ball because of these three reasons.
>>> CORRECT
Also, I also want to try ping pong that makes me taller.
>>> I also want to try ping pong which helps me get taller.
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