What sport would you like to learn?
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I\'d like to learn skiing! I love winter sports such as skiing, skating, riding on sled, but they are too expensive. Thus, I haven\'t had any chance to learn them in regular classes. If I have a chance to learn any sports, I will select to learn skiing. I love to enjoy the speed. Riding in cold air makes me feel refreshed. In addition, I can enjoy the great view from the ski slopes, either. If I have enough money, I want to stay in a resort and take ski classes! That\'s my dream :D
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Hello [이름]!
I\'d love to learn to learn how to ski as well if given a chance.
Very good in explaining your answer! Great job!
Very good in explaining your answer! Great job!
T. Pamela
What sport would you like to learn?
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or >>I would like to learn how to ski.
I love winter sports such as skiing, skating, riding on sled, but they are too expensive.
>>I love winter sports such as skiing, skating, riding on sled, but they are too expensive.
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Thus, I haven\'t had any chance to learn them in regular classes.
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or >> That\'s why I have not had any chance on learning them in regular classes.
If I have a chance to learn any sports, I will select to learn skiing.
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or >> If I will have a chance to learn any sports, I will choose skiing.
I love to enjoy the speed.
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Riding in cold air makes me feel refreshed.
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In addition, I can enjoy the great view from the ski slopes, either.
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or >> I can also enjoy the view from the top of the ski resorts.
If I have enough money, I want to stay in a resort and take ski classes! That\'s my dream :D
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or >> If I will have enough money, I want to stay in a resort and take ski classes! That\'s my dream.
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