What sport would you want to try or learn? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to play the Boxing because it is famous in every country.
And I want to learn swimming because I like water.
Also I want to learn Muay Thai because it is very cool.
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I\'m sending you back your revised composition. Please go over the revisions written below, such as putting a comma after the word \"also\". Good night!
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Jean~~
What sport would you want to try or learn? Explain your answer.
I want to play the Boxing because it is famous in every country.
>> I want to try boxing because it is famous in every country.
And I want to learn swimming because I like water.
>> And I want to learn how to swim because I like water.
Also I want to learn Muay Thai because it is very cool.
>> Also, I want to learn Muay Thai because it is very cool.
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