What sports do you play? Why do you like playing it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I play soccer. Beacause soccer can running, shooting, and l can play together.
I play table tennis. Beacause ping-pong everyone can play table tennis together and the ball is fast.
강사 첨삭
Wow! Wonderful job Ji Han :) You were able to answer. Next time, make sure to pay attention to your spelling. Other than that, you did well. Keep it up!
~ T. Demi^^
I play soccer. Beacause soccer can running, shooting, and l can play together.~ T. Demi^^
>> I play soccer because I can run, shoot, and play with other people.
I play table tennis. Beacause ping-pong everyone can play table tennis together and the ball is fast.
>> I play table tennis because everyone can play it together and the ball is fast.
I play table tennis. Beacause ping-pong everyone can play table tennis together and the ball is fast.
>> I play table tennis because everyone can play it together and the ball is fast.
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