What sports I play with my friends.
학생이 쓴 원문
I play basketball with my friends.
That is because basketball has so many rules and that the rules are not very complex.
My second reason is basketball is easy to have a score.
My third reason is dribbling the ball is fun and easy.
Finally, basketball doesn\'t have a fighting and injuries
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Your homework is
well-organized and easy to understand. Great job! Enjoy playing basketball with your friends.
- Teacher Debbie
I play basketball with my friends.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because basketball has so many rules and that the rules are not very complex.
>> It has so many rules, but they are not very complex.
My second reason is basketball is easy to have a score.
>> Hence, it is easy to score in basketball.
My third reason is dribbling the ball is fun and easy.
>> Dribbling is also easy and fun.
Finally, basketball doesn\'t have a fighting and injuries
>> Finally, it doesn\'t involve fighting and does not cause many injuries.
- Teacher Debbie
I play basketball with my friends.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because basketball has so many rules and that the rules are not very complex.
>> It has so many rules, but they are not very complex.
My second reason is basketball is easy to have a score.
>> Hence, it is easy to score in basketball.
My third reason is dribbling the ball is fun and easy.
>> Dribbling is also easy and fun.
Finally, basketball doesn\'t have a fighting and injuries
>> Finally, it doesn\'t involve fighting and does not cause many injuries.
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