What sports would you like to try out if you had more time?

2020-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I would like to learn dance sports. I\'m not good at dancing. From before I have been wanting to dance but it was too hard. I was satisfied just watching on TV. If I have a chance, I would like to dance with a nice partner. (without with my husband ^^) But my body is stick and I may be can\'t wave body. I\'m enough to only imagine.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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I would like to learn dance sports.
>>>  correct
I\'m not good at dancing.
>>>  correct 
From before I have been wanting to dance but it was too hard. 
>>> Since in the past, I have been wanting to dance but it was too hard.  
I was satisfied just watching on TV.
>>> I was just satisfied watching it on TV.  
If I have a chance, I would like to dance with a nice partner. (without with my husband ^^)
>>> correct  
B
ut my body is stick and I may be can\'t wave body. 
>>>  But my body is stiff and I maybe I can\'t do the body wave.   
I\'m enough to only imagine.
>>> I\'m contented with just imagining it.  

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