What springs to mind when you hear the term ‘animal rights?
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Animal right?
I think the Animal rights is that their\'s receive the love right.
Actually I have one dog.
He\'s name is smart.
When I feel tired, sad, He is always look at me.
This is my pleasure.
If somebody suggest that replace my dog with 50000000 dollars.
I refuse it.
This is animal rights for me.
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Animal right?
>>What is animal rights?
I think the Animal rights is that their\'s receive the love right.
>>I think Animal rights is to receive the right to love.
Actually, I have one dog.
Actually, I have one dog.
>>correct
He\'s name is Smart.
He\'s name is Smart.
>>His name is Smart.
When I feel tired, sad, He is always look at me.
>>When I feel tired and sad, he always looks at me.
This is my pleasure.
>>correct
If somebody suggest that replace my dog with 50000000 dollars.
This is my pleasure.
>>correct
If somebody suggest that replace my dog with 50000000 dollars.
>>If somebody will suggest to replace my dog with $50,000,000.
I refuse it.
I refuse it.
>>correct
OR>>I would refuse it.
This is animal rights for me.
OR>>I would refuse it.
This is animal rights for me.
>>correct
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