What springs to mind when you hear the word ‘bullying’?

2018-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Q:What springs to mind when you hear the word ‘bullying’? When I hear the word, I feel really sad Also, I don't know why make the bullying? I know, some teenager make bullying person. Korea also has serious problems. even though, some of young guys have dead. It is very terrible situation. Sometimes, it has this problem in Company. I think all of group has problems. I hate this situation. We have to respect each other. Although we are something different. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

I do believe that you are determined to enhance your abilities in English.

There were some mistakes but don\'t let those mistakes conquer your strength.

I hope that you will still continue to develop this way.

You can learn from this process.

See yourself as a person who will be successful. So don\'t pull yourself down I know you can do it! 
 ^.^ Just keep it up!!

T. Jeny

   


Q:What springs to mind when you hear the word ‘bullying’?
>>correct
When I hear the word, I feel really sad
>>When I hear the word \"bullying,\" I really feel sad.
Also, I don\'t know why make the bullying?
>>I also don\'t know why they bully.
I know, some teenager make bullying person.
>>I know some teenagers bully other people.
Korea also has serious problems.
>>It is also a serious problem in Korea.
even though, some of young guys have dead.
>>Even though, some young guys die.
It is very terrible situation.
>>It is a very terrible situation.
Sometimes, it has this problem in Company.
>>Sometimes, this problem occurs in companies too.
I think all of group has problems.
>>I think, we encounter this problem in all kinds of groups.
I hate this situation.
>>correct
We have to respect each other.

>>correct

Although we are something different.
>>Even though, we are different from each other.
Thank you.

>>correct

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