What springs to mind when you hear the word \'nature\'? Answer in 3-5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I hear the word \'nature\', \'blue\' springs to my mind.
Blue is very common color in nature.
Oceans, sky, lakes are full of blue variety.
Blue is embracing color. It dissolves everything.
Even the green color is more common in nature, but blue gives us especial sense.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Sue!
(^_^)//
You did a good job in accomplishing your homework.
I tried to rephrase your sentences without changing the context.
We can talk about this in class if you want to. See you then!^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
When I hear the word \'nature\', \'blue\' springs to my mind.
>>> Whenever I hear the word \'nature\', the color blue springs to my mind.
Blue is very common color in nature.
Blue is very common color in nature.
>>> Blue is a very common color in nature.
Oceans, sky, lakes are full of blue variety.
Oceans, sky, lakes are full of blue variety.
>>> The skies, oceans, lakes are all blue.
Blue is embracing color. It dissolves everything.
Blue is embracing color. It dissolves everything.
>>> Blue is an embracing color and it dissolves everything.
Even the green color is more common in nature, but blue gives us especial sense.
Even the green color is more common in nature, but blue gives us especial sense.
>>> Even though green color is more common in nature, blue gives us a special sense.
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