What stories have you read or heard recently about the environment?
학생이 쓴 원문
I recently saw on the TV that people are often throwing trash on the floor.
So, I heard that the environment is bad these days.
Also the environment is getting worse.
강사 첨삭
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I recently saw on the TV that people are often throwing trash on the floor.
>> I recently saw on TV people often throwing trash on the ground.
So, I heard that the environment is bad these days.
So, I heard that the environment is bad these days.
>> Correct
Also the environment is getting worse.
Also the environment is getting worse.
>> The environment is also getting worse.
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