What stresses you the most and how to you handle it?
학생이 쓴 원문
What stresses you the most and how to you handle it?
The most stress in my work.
I have to handle a lot of work everyday.
Our client has many comments for excuting project. I have to coordinate and follow up their comments with other department.
sometimes, Client is required a unreasonable things. That why I am streessed out.
I usually work out to relieve my strees. Sometime I go shopping and chat with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Yes, our jobs are one of the main reasons why we feel stressed. :( I think the solution to this is to properly manage our time and obtain long patience. :)
The most stress in my work.
>> I get stressed the most because of work.
I have to handle a lot of work everyday.
I have to handle a lot of work everyday.
>> CORRECT
Our client has many comments for excuting project.
Our client has many comments for excuting project.
>>Our client has many comments for our exciting project.
I have to coordinate and follow up their comments with other department.
>> I have to coordinate and follow up their comments with other departments.
sometimes, Client is required a unreasonable things. That why I am streessed out.
sometimes, Client is required a unreasonable things. That why I am streessed out.
>>Sometimes, the client is requiring unreasonable things that\'s why I get stressed out.
I usually work out to relieve my strees.
I usually work out to relieve my strees.
>> I usually work out to relieve my stress.
Sometime I go shopping and chat with my friends.
>> Sometime I go shopping and chat with my friends too.
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