What success have you had in this English class? What can you do to be more successful?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sir [이름]!
How are you? I hope that you are feeling better.
How\'s your vacation? Did you have a great time? I hope you did.
I am glad that you are not giving up in improving your skills.
Don\'t be frustrated. I can say that you improved especially in terms of your writing abilities.
These days, you compose wonderful and credible compositions.
You don\'t know how you make me happy. I hope that you won\'t stop.
I am always here to help you out more. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I do not see a tangible result of taking this English class through Power English.
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I’m not blaming Power English.
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>> OR: I am not blaming your company.
Actually, I have studied English for a long time through other means such as private language institutions, schools, self-studying, etc., but I cannot say that my effort eventually paid off.
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I am not sure what I have achieved and how much I have improved.
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I feel like I’m stuck without moving forward.
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I sometimes feel frustrated.
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I just would like to believe that if I keep working without giving-up, my English competency would improve at the end.
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I really wonder whether time will come, making myself realize that I have improved a lot.
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>> OR: I really wonder when the time will come that will make me realize that I have improved a lot.
It is true that studying a language takes time.
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My listening, speaking and writing ability seem to be the same as those of when I was 10 years ago or so.
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>> OR: My skills such as listening, speaking and writing seem to be the same like ten years ago.
Power English helps me not to make my Speaking skills further deteriorated and maintain the current level.
>> Did you mean: Power English helps me not to make my speaking skills further deteriorated but maintain the current level.
I think that in order to improve my English skills dramatically, I need to--
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